User talk:Mtbeerbower

Mercyhurst College Institute for Intelligence Studies

 * The reason that I put the cleanup tag is that Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and as it currently stands, the article reads to me like promotional material, not like an encyclopedic article. Listing the entire faculty or a recent news and awards section isn't something I can recall seeing in any articles on similar subjects. --DMG413 00:43, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
 * I agree, and that's been bothering me, too. I didn't create the page, but I'm trying to clean it up and improve it. Now I have a better sense of how much work there is to do. I'll look at other articles on academic institutions as models. Thanks. --Mtbeerbower 16:34, 13 December 2006 (UTC)