User talk:Mtjames20/Alma Gottlieb

Hi Miranda! This article is off to a great start and is very dense in important information. I do have a few suggestions and things to note: First, you switch between capitalizing and not capitalizing the word "anthropology", so I would definitely take a look at that and decide if there is one way which is best, so as to homogenize the capitalization as much as possible. Format-wise, your headings seem to be different from the traditional Wikipedia style, so maybe go back to the formatting tool bar and click around (I believe there are clearly laid out fonts/styles for 'heading 1', 'subheading', 'title', etc.). Another item to note is that the "Life" section seems to encompass more than what I would typically think to include in such a section- possibly consider retitling it so it reflects the academic nature of said section? Perhaps "Academic Life" or something of the like would be more fitting. Nice job linking all the pertinent words! Overall, this is looking like a very promising article full of detailed information. Isabelhb (talk) 14:38, 30 March 2017 (UTC)