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Cell Biology Critique
After reviewing this article I noticed there are certain changes that can be made in order to improve this article. The information represented is not inaccurate. There just aren't any sources backing up the information that is represented by this article so far. Further researching the topic, finding sources and articles that back up this information will fix that. The article can be structured differently with additions of more detailed information that further backs it up. Pictures or diagrams can be added within the article too. This will ensure that the information is indeed accurate and will add onto topics related to local hormones. The information presented in this article is not biased, it is factual. It looks like it could have been copied and pasted from a source that wasn't cited.

Article Contributions
I added in more references to the article to back up the information that is present so far within the article. Ended up putting in more information that helps the reader to understand what a Labile cell is and what happens to the cell when it goes through cell division. Also, linked certain words/processes so if someone doesn't understand those words they can easily click on the link and be brought to a page that will give them more information on that specific process. Mtour005 (talk) 17:02, 20 November 2016 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mtour005 (talk • contribs) 00:40, 17 November 2016 (UTC)