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Samia's Peer Review
Hey Madisen!

First off I want to say that you picked such a great topic for this article. Not a lot of data is collected showing the women's point of view, so to bring that to light is amazing. I also liked how you show which sectors women typically dominate in because its a vital thing to show when looking at the economy.

Just a few things I wasn't sure of, so you insert a quote from an author which I'm not sure if we can do, because I remember from the training's that we have to do "close paraphrasing". So I would just double check that. Also, when you say "women are often undervalued in data compilation"- what kind of data are you referring to? Is it women representation in the informal sector? I would make that a little bit clearer.

Just a couple suggestions: Towards the end you talk about how some policies have created barriers for women, I think if you had some examples on certain policies that could make your section stronger. And lastly, if you had some data or statistics to show the percentage change of women in different industries over time (i.e. In 2000, Ugandan women made up 10% of the informal sector, currently in 2018 that number has climbed to 30%). Something like that could be useful. Other than that, its looking great!

S.sherif (talk) 02:51, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

Hey!

I really like your topic! So I'm guessing we're the African Feminism group of the class!

I find the "women are often undervalued" in data compilation quite interesting! Since its the first draft, I'm looking forward to seeing the type of data you'll draw in, and how it could further illustrate inequality towards African women.

Real excited in learning more about this topic! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crespo5 (talk • contribs) 03:50, 10 April 2019 (UTC)

Hey!

I really like your topic! So I'm guessing we're the African Feminism group of the class!

I find the "women are often undervalued" in data compilation quite interesting! Since its the first draft, I'm looking forward to seeing the type of data you'll draw in, and how it could further illustrate inequality towards African women.

Real excited in learning more about this topic!

Mauricio — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crespo5 (talk • contribs) 03:53, 10 April 2019 (UTC)