User talk:Mumu Fang

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Hello, Mumu Fang, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Mental health in education
Hi! I saw that you were editing a page on a psychology and health related topic. I want you to take this training module that goes over what is needed to edit medical topics. You can also find additional material on this talk page. Basically, with health and psychology topics have a few extra requirements when it comes to writing and sourcing. You need to make sure that you are writing as neutrally as possible and that you use secondary or tertiary sources. Primary sources like studies should only be used if you have a secondary or tertiary source that covers it. Here's some more information about this from the page on medical reliable sources:

In the biomedical literature:
 * A primary source in medicine is one in which the authors directly participated in the research or documented their personal experiences. They examined the patients, injected the rats, ran the experiments, or at least supervised those who did. Many, but not all, papers published in medical journals are primary sources for facts about the research and discoveries made.
 * A secondary source in medicine summarizes one or more primary or secondary sources, usually to provide an overview of current understanding of the topic, to make recommendations, or to combine results of several studies. Examples include literature reviews or systematic reviews found in medical journals, specialist academic or professional books, and medical guidelines or position statements published by major health organizations.
 * A tertiary source usually summarizes a range of secondary sources. Undergraduate or graduate level textbooks, edited scientific books, lay scientific books, and encyclopedias are examples of tertiary sources.

Of the sources you used, this, this, this, and this are all studies. Studies should generally be avoided unless they're accompanied with a secondary source that reviews the study or comments upon the specific claim that is being stated. The reason for this is that studies are primary sources for any of the claims and research conducted by their authors. The publishers don't provide any commentary or in-depth verification, as they only check to ensure that the study doesn't have any glaring errors that would invalidate it immediately. Study findings also tend to be only true for the specific people or subjects that were studied. For example, a person in one area may respond differently than one in an area located on the other side of the country. Socioeconomic factors (be they for the person or a family member) also play a large role, among other things that can impact a response. As such, it's definitely important to find a secondary source, as they can provide this context, verification, and commentary. Aside from that, there's also the issue of why a specific study should be highlighted over another. For example, someone could ask why one study was chosen as opposed to something that studied a similar topic or had different results.

I hope that this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:07, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
 * I checked over your work and I saw that several of the sources you used were studies - these will need secondary sources, otherwise your work stands a strong chance of being removed since it doesn't follow the reliable source guidelines for medicine and psychology topics. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:57, 28 June 2019 (UTC)

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