User talk:Mumu Fang/sandbox

Possible changes to your changes
Within 'prevalence of mental health issues in adolescents', would make it more clean to list like: 1. 2. 3. etc.

Kieran's Peer Review
Looks solid. It could possibly use a socioeconomic approach at all the varying age levels of education. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lostinthemix18 (talk • contribs) 15:12, 25 June 2019 (UTC)

Amanda's Peer Review
I think what you have added already is really good! In your sandbox I see a lot of potential on how you plan to approach the rest of the work you are going to do here. The only thing I would say is that there were a few grammatical errors that you can easily fix, just remember to re-read what you've written so that it makes sense before you publish. Other than that I think you are on a great track to editing this article. Amoquin11 (talk) 14:02, 26 June 2019 (UTC)