User talk:Murmurerer/Tom Palazzolo

I just made so punctuation and sentence structure edits to your article, otherwise I think you have a good start. I would just be sure to cite your sources, and maybe include a seperate section for an annotated bibliography. I would also start to flesh out different sections, maybe an early years section, or another that goes more into the specifics of Palazzolo's career. In your filmography section I might provide links to these videos, if they are available, so that the public knows where to find them. Overall, good work!