User talk:MusaMinh/sandbox

=Evaluations=

2/01/2018 Evaluation by acidgirltogo
acidgirltogo (talk) 2 x Exceeds Standards (4.5) = 9
 * Points: 40/40

7 x Meets Standards (4) = 28

1 x Nearly Meets Standards (3) = 3
 * Grade: 100% (Good Job!)

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standards.

Language
Nearly Meets Standards. Just a little clumsy language. Still far better flow than the original. EXAMPLE: " After the battle, An Austrian colonel claimed to have seen a corpse matching the physical and clothing descriptions of Sandor Petofi." The word 'an' doesn't need to be capitalized. I find the wording 'physical and clothing descriptions' to be strange and misplaced. I might reverse them to say 'clothing and physical description'. I would drop the 's' at the end of 'descriptions'. EXAMPLE: "theories suggest that he was one of them", I also just find the wording a little off. I might say "he was one of the 1800'. EXAMPLE: "In 1990, an expedition was organised to Barguzin, Siberia, where archaeologists claimed to have unearthed Petőfi's skeleton." Once more, just a little off in the organization of the words. It makes it sound like the expedition was organized before the archaeologists made the claim of unearthing his skeleton. So I might say "Archologists claimed to have unearthed his skeleton, therefore in 1990 an expedition to Barguzin, Siberia was organized to research whether or not it was him. This claim has since been discredited." I do stress, however, that this is very well written already and this is just nitpicking in an attempt to help you improve your edit.

Organization
Meets Standards.

Coding
Meets Standards.

Validity
Exceeds Standards.

Completion
Meets standards.

Relevance
Meets Standards.