User talk:Muzvare

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Hello, Muzvare, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! -- Whpq (talk) 12:07, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
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November 2011
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. One of the core policies of Wikipedia is that articles should always be written from a neutral point of view. A contribution you made to Betty Makoni appears to carry a non-neutral point of view, and your edit may have been changed or reverted to correct the problem. Please remember to observe this important core policy. Thank you. Whpq (talk) 12:06, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Dear sir or madam I am not so sure if you say its non neutral can you cite examples and be specific Everything written has a supporting document Kindly send clarity on your concern The bio you are putting back is by far less what this individual achieved Thank you] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Muzvare (talk • contribs)

An example would be material such as:
 * She is a brave and courageous woman for doing that. She is an African Goddess and best described as a woman of African descent who possesses an authentic, self-sufficient, female power. She is a woman of African descent who sets her own trends and sets her own pace. She dances to the tune of her own music. She is intelligent, innovative, and gets results, and she has a heart for her community.

Which would be fine if you wanted to create a web page for her as a fan or admirer, but is not appropriate for an encyclopedia article. I can help you expand the article, but you need to be aware of policies on biographies of living people which requires documentation of facts with reliable sources, and of course you need to adhere to a neutral point of view. I'll also note that your edits break the formatting of the article, and need to conform to Wikipedia's manual of style. I suggest that any comments you may have about developing the article should be posted to Talk:Betty Makoni where more editors will come across them. Regards. -- Whpq (talk) 23:32, 6 November 2011 (UTC)