User talk:Mvillalba8/sandbox

Peer Review
Content was neutral and informative. Gave further explanation and details on Sikh Festival regarding the feud between four princes and celebration dates. Author used plenty of credible sources and one outside source from a forum posted by Sikh philosophy members. Overall great addition to the wiki page. Only thing i'd possibly add is another book/article entry otherwise great job! --Kt5919 (talk) 19:43, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review #2
The information is very neutral and detailed. It uses four sources for three sentences which means it is very well-sourced. However, the author of the draft should switch up the beginning of their sentences because they all start with the word "The" which is very repetitive. Maybe for the last sentence you could start "Both of the older sons" or something like that to break up the monotony. Also, the second sentence could be rewritten as "There are two dates of the celebration, which occur on the 21 and 26 of December respectively," or something of that nature. Bsanchez79 (talk) 22:49, 19 October 2018 (UTC)