User talk:Mwa459/sandbox

-Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? The discussion on airplane designers polishing their planes to produce beautiful designs doesn't completely follow with the rest of the article

-Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? In the section turbine engines, there's a claim that Frank Whittle was crestfallen over Griffin's response to Whittle's work yet he still researched the idea he proposed. The wording in this section while not biased seems somewhat strong and mildly confusing.

-Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? The section on Griffin's period of work at Rolls-Royce is underrepresented with twenty one years of his life described in a few sentences.

-Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? Yes, the links work and support the claims in the article referencing Griffin's papers and a description of him in the British Royal Society.

-Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? In the section on turbine engines, there are two sections that need sourcing. The first paragraph references a paper by Griffin without providing a link to said paper The fifth paragraph on Griffin's rejection of Whittle's design lacks a reference. -Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? In the section metal fatigue; some of the equations related to Griffin's work on stress fractures could also be included Some more information on Griffin's work at Rolls-Royce could be added

-Check out the Talk page of the article. What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? An archive link to Rolls-Royces website based on Griffin seems to be added.

-How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? This article is rated Start-Class This article is supported by the aerospace biography project -How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mwa459 (talk • contribs) 17:23, 16 February 2018 (UTC)