User talk:Mwestmillennial/sandbox

Feedback
It's a little hard for me to give you concrete feedback this at the moment as the article seems to still be a collection of fragments rather than a draft of a full article. It looks like you've done a good job of collecting some good source material and citations. The NCA links/awards and the Em Griffin interview I think do a pretty good job of establishing notability but even that's a little hard to evaluate until you really integrate this into the text.

Can you try putting this together into a more full draft with article text, a WP:LEDE, etc, and with the links formatted/structured as references? When you're done, ping me again and I can give you some feedback. It's a little hard to think about tone and such before the article has a little more structure. — m a k o ๛  22:42, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
 * I've flushed out the writing, as well as added the formatting and sections based on similar profiles. More feedback is appreciated. --Mwestmillennial (talk) 05:31, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Since this is a biography article I would recommend visiting WikiProject Biography/Infoboxes to select an infobox to add relevant information about the person that may appear in your article, but gives quick facts to readers at the top of the page. I would also add a few more wikilinks to relevant information, the names of University's and other people mentioned in the article are very helpful to readers. MBlairMartin (talk) 00:38, 25 October 2016 (UTC)