User talk:Mybestwords

Help me!
I've been asked by Ambassador John Loeb to make updates in several sections of his Wikipedia page at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Langeloth_Loeb,_Jr.

I am new to Wikipedia and I want to ask your advice on how best to make the updates - I.e. Should I make the directly to the page all at once, section by section, or otherwise. They are integrated into several different paragraphs and are not so easy to describe/propose on this Talk page so I'm leaning toward making them directly on the page but wanted to check with you, the more seasoned editors.

Thanks in advance for your help with this.

Mybestwords (talk) 19:02, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
 * You also posted this request on the talk page of the article, where I answered it. P p p er y 19:17, 15 September 2016 (UTC)