User talk:Myepez1998/Bikram Yoga

Sourcing
This looks like a good start. . .but where is your bibliography/sourcing? ProfHanley (talk) 17:04, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft
I don't see any drafting here. Why not start your draft by specifying what you're going to improve on the existing "Bikram Yoga" page. ProfHanley (talk) 17:41, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello I just completed your peer review for your draft. I did not find much content in your draft but it was well written and concise. I would suggest looking at more sources to draw information from and start by writing a good lead. I would also suggest to look at your existing sources as they are not up to date. IDOSALSA101 (talk) 20:25, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft III
There's been very little progress on the article - - too bad because your peer reviewer was ready to help out. The finish line is very close and now would be an excellent time to finish up the draft. ProfHanley (talk) 17:30, 31 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft IV
I don't see exactly what you've developed. Help me. ProfHanley (talk) 18:14, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Draft V
I don't see much has been developed here since your last edit. ProfHanley (talk) 18:10, 14 November 2023 (UTC)