User talk:Mzeri13/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
Changing "and" to "or" didn't really improve the sentence. The second change ("duo" to "trio") was much better. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:08, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
The first source looks good, but the second source doesn't seem relevant to the excerpt from the article. You should either see where the source could more directly support the information in the article or find another source. Make your changes within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:36, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Should I add my sources into the article? Mzeri13 (talk) 21:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Amazon isn't a library source, and it's not even the best source for the information (doesn't Atlantic Records have a catalog website?), but it will do. You should add the sources to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:09, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * The article from Entertainment Weekly wasn't added properly. Follow the instructions I went over in class. You must fill in the bibliographic information rather than just plug in the URL. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:11, 28 April 2018 (UTC)


 * The revision is a bit better, but still not quite right. A link to EBSCO isn't going to be useful for most readers. Instead, the citation should include the name of the publication. Anyway, we'll have to leave it for others to fix. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 16:35, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Anderlecht"
For this type of article, the lead usually provides a summary of the type of information that can be found within. Or you could provide some overall numbers: how many seasons in European soccer since year XXXX, etc. Post a draft within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:45, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Perhaps a better way to word the first sentence would be, "The first time Anderlecht qualified for a European competition..." Otherwise it's a good lead. Go ahead and add it to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:18, 23 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw you added the lead. It's good enough, but to improve it further for a better grade, you should add internal links to the various European competitions mentioned in the lead. Do it in the next three days. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:35, 28 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Internal links added. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 16:36, 6 May 2018 (UTC)