User talk:Mzili

Ajak Deng-article review It’s a biography of living persons Assessment class Has been rated a start- class article. This means it on its development stages Templates 	14 editors 	Minor edits 3 	Links to this page 14 	Links from this page 33 	External links 8 	References 8 Stability •	Not stable •	Has dead links •	Some aspects of the biography are not covered •	Has been recently edited in October 2020 this year •	Has no page protection Reference diversity 1.	Has no external links 2.	No mention of prominent websites Breadth •	Has no lead section •	The structure is really not clear •	Has no images •	Brief outline •	Has a summary of the biography (Ajak Deng) The article is not reliable and barely useful. It requires further development. Suggestions to improve 1.	The article should follow the Biography of Living Person policy (BLP) 2.	More reliable sources are required at the reference section 3.	The structure of the article needs to be improved.

Mzili (talk) 09:16, 5 December 2020 (UTC)