User talk:Mzkoya26/sandbox

Great start to your draft. I did get lost in some of the technical terminology; hoverer, you did provide definitions and examples throughout the draft. I know you will be adding on more information onto the topic. Also, tone of voice is neutral, which is what is desired. Some gas phrases do appear capitalized, but I am not sure this is necessary. I am not an expert in this topic, but it was interesting to read about. If you want you can add the different effects that are caused by the gas emissions as well to make a stringer case. Overall, great job.

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I really appreciate the feedback! I will be sure to look over all of the terminology again and in cases where it may be confusing or more technical I will further expand or add hyperlinks to related documents which could further develop on the meaning of the word. Also, I wasn't too sure if the gases should be capitalized either, so I will find that out and correct that as well! Thank You ---

Article and information put inside are relevant. The information is a subtopic of the actual topic which is interesting. Good amount of information for a rough draft, with lots of detail incorporated into it. More sources may be needed so the information has evidence along with it. Neutral when writing as well, and that is the desired direction. Sources seem reliable and well established. If you keep going with this pace and this type of writing it will be a very good topic. Ykhaleq (talk) 07:26, 27 March 2019 (UTC)

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Thanks you, I am in the process of gather lots of more sources as well for my article. A lot of my sources come from discussing the topics with Air Quality Engineers at the Bureau of Automotive as well so it comes off as second hand knowledge.