User talk:NA123NA123

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Hi Chaheel,

Could you clarify what specifically didn't match the neutrality standards? I agree all edits are supposed to be neutral. That's why I edited the page. The original content was *not* neutral. It referred to one side's argument as hyperbolic, which is not a neutral stance. And the wording "Anti-apartheid groups welcomed the move," implies that Israel being an Apartheid state is a given, when in fact--as quoted in the article linked to--that's a hotly debated topic.

In contrast, I endeavored to use more neutral language--or language that reflected the sources quoted. Nothing I wrote didn't come from the quoted source.

So if there's something in particular that seems off, please let me know and I'll change it. But my overall goal is not to make biased edits but to make a biased page more neutral.

Thanks NA123NA123 (talk) 17:18, 12 October 2021 (UTC)