User talk:NBasham1/sandbox/Cordoba

=Evaluations=

10/17/2018 Evaluation by Koopnasty
Koopnasty (Koopnasty) 01:56, 10 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Points: 42.5 ?
 * Grade:

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standard I think the last sentence would sound better if it were two sentences, it sort of runs on. It would sound better to start out with "Cordoba's large city center that has been designated...)

Language
Meets Standard I think some words can be omitted in the article to make it more "encyclopedia-like". I made this mistake too. And the more you write, the more you have to go into detail about those topics it seems like. Good neutral language.

Organization
Exceeds ExpectationsNo errors in the heading.

Coding
Exceeds Expectations I'm not a pro on this, but it looks well constructed. Just a source for that photo but everything seems to be done correctly.

Validity
Meets StandardThe information seems accurate. A little more concise info would bump this up to perfection. Maybe just one more solid fact that is cited by one of your sources.

Completion
Meets Standard Your sources are good for finding that specific info, but I think you could use them more to explain specifics. Such as how geometry and math changed architecture for middle eastern methods. Good job using the Cordoba Mosque as a prime example.

Relevance
Exceeds Expectations It flows smooth as a transition to the section of the actual wiki article. The actual wiki goes into architectural examples and this intro piece is needed. No excess knowledge here, and possibly with some specifics you have the right framework for the wiki page.

10/16/2018 Evaluation by Antipter223
Antipater223 (talk) 04:52, 17 October 2018 (UTC)

Evaluation by DrMichaelWright (talk) 10:38, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
Overall, this would be a good addition to the Cordoba page, as a new second paragraph, perhaps integrating parts of the existing second paragraph, replacing redundancies.

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Expectations

Perfect!

Language
Meets Expectations

Good encyclopedic tone and diction.

Organization
Nearly Meets Expectations

It's unclear where you're intending to place this in the current Wikipedia page. It seems like it could be integrated well with the existing second paragraph, but it currently only partially overlaps with that paragraph.

Coding
Exceeds Expectations

Perfect!

Validity
Meets Expectations

The information seems valid enough, though I think you might have specified which patios. Most inhabitants of the city who have a patio, do not have a patios of Roman or Moorish vintage. It ought to be specified that these patios are in the style of those earlier patios - they are not necessarily the same ones. Also, 'Islamic' is so very broad. That might have been narrowed somewhat. Of course, your source material is not that specific either.

Completion
Meets Expectations

There is enough new material here to suffice for this assignment.

Relevance
Nearly Meets Expectations

As with organization, the material here is relevant, but only where it would be added in the right place in the article. For example, the material about the patios would best fit in a section on patios (currently absent).