User talk:NDesmond

Hi,

Re your recent edits to Adopted_Child_Syndrome, can I ask are those direct quotes from the Smith book? If so, they'll need to be re-edited. As presented, they read like 'fact', when they are really just assertions by Smith. It should be possible to re-edit in a more NPOV tone, I think. Bastun 10:29, 30 May 2006 (UTC)