User talk:NE Ent/Civility

I think the essay contains many good points and might be bettered by breaking each point into it's own paragraph. For example you could have a paragraph on "Provocation" and another on "Advice", etc. Additional paragraphs on "Bad Language - OK?", etc. --HighKing (talk) 01:38, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Gerardw (talk) 02:32, 25 January 2009 (UTC)