User talk:NIKOLSON13

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Hello, NIKOLSON13, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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COVID-19 pandemic in New York (state)
Hello, and thank you for your addition to this article. Unfortunately, the addition mostly doesn't meet our neutral point of view policy, so it has been removed. Sentences like However, it is also important to note that it is clearly going to take so much more than this or what has already been done to not only gain but maintain and ensure the public's trust when it comes to vaccines in the best interest of the public's health when concerning this specific crisis as well as it's emerging vaccine which is still in the works. are expressing an opinion, especially with regards to the usage of words such as "it is clearly going to take so much more". These sentences also seem to be providing guidance on what to do, which is a violation of our Wikipedia is not a guide policy. Additionally, it may be more appropriate to place this section in an article which deals about treatments for COVID-19.

I see that you're a Wiki Ed student, so I suggest that you ask your mentor/instructor on guidance with regards to writing text neutrally. While your edits are good-faith additions, they do not fit Wikipedia policies, and as a result, need to be rewritten before being added again. Thank you. epicgenius (talk) 19:14, 26 June 2020 (UTC)