User talk:NJ151/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
I don't see any evidence showing you copyedited an article? Were you logged in? Josef Horáček (talk) 18:05, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I saw your edit. Your changes didn't actually fix any errors, but it's time to move on. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:23, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
Your sources look relevant and reputable. Go ahead and add them to the article within the next week.

You should also clarify in your sandbox which article you're working on (surely not the Battle of Baton Rouge!) and add the article to the dashboard. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:30, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw you added the sources to "University of Alabama." In terms of formatting, the names of the authors shouldn't be in all-caps. Other than that, great job. You're done with this assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 00:16, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Japanese Swords in Fiction"
Article approved. Post a draft of your lead within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:16, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Your draft isn't very informative, and it doesn't maintain a neutral point of view. Write another draft. Keep it short and to the point: "The Japanese sword, or katana, appears in... [name various genres, with examples take from the article]." You can also add something about the typical attributes of the sword or its common uses. But again, be factual and maintain an NPOV! Josef Horáček (talk) 23:36, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Your revision was a big improvement. I saw you added it to the article. You could have added an internal link to "katana" and maybe a few other terms, but we'll leave that to someone else. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 00:19, 1 May 2018 (UTC)