User talk:NK1296/Gulf killifish

Peer Review Amber Desselle

First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? - I liked that this article was straight to the point, very concise and clear to the reader what they are trying to convey. What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement? - I am not sure that this is a cultural study so I would change the word choice on that. Another word choice change would be to change when you say “the study proves” to maybe this study concludes as one experiment does not completely prove anything. What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? - The most important thing to improve the article is to review some of the word choice as indicated above. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! - The article has a very good bibliography set up, I can improve upon my own after seeing this.

Amberdesse (talk) 23:09, 12 October 2020 (UTC)amberdesse