User talk:NNU-01-05100112

Welcome students from Nanjing Normal University
1, Hello. Are you a student at Nanjing Normal University? If you are I want to say hello.

2, My name is Anna. I live in Haikou, Hainan. I come from Canada.

3, I can help you if you need.

4, Don't worry. Be brave. You can write. No problem.

Some good things to help you:
 * 1, Look at other articles. See how they organize it. Copy the style.
 * 2, Use the information you get for your article, and write it in your words.
 * 3, Don't use baike. It is not professionally written.
 * 4, Put this at the end of the sentences or paragraphs to show where the information comes from:




 * 5, Put this at the bottom of your article:


 * ==References==



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15:40, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 02:43, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 03:59, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:29, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Shuihui Garden
Hello,

I saw that you created Shuihui Garden. You can add in internal Wikipedia links using square brackets like this: Ming Dynasty Ming Dynasty. THere should also be references. I found these web sites: http://www.chinatouronline.com/china-travel/nantong/nantong-attractions/Shui-Hui-Yuan-Garden_858.html, http://www.worldviewbank.com/en/show11-js_shuihuiyuan.html, http://www.luopan.com/t/en_US/226000L000003.html, but these are all travel guides, and may not be reliable. I expect that you would know of better sources such as books, or government publications on the topic. Please add references to say where information comes from. Also there are places where space characters should be inserted, such as before "(" and after a ",". Where you used "bright pearl" it sounds like promotional language.  It would be better to say most scenic, or most beautiful.  But since these are points of view, you would need a source of information to support the statement.  It may also be worth quoting a line or two of poetry about the garden, if it exists. Mistakes to fix: mergers is a noun plural of merger, you really meant merges.  "Mordern" is a spelling mistake.  If you use a modern web browser like Firefox it will underline mistakes such as this and offer a correction when you right click.  In the last paragraph you write about "the music".  Using "the" suggests that this is music that the reader already knows about, perhaps music that you talked about earlier on the page.  But you did not mention it.  If it is not any particular music, just say "music" with the "the". Graeme Bartlett (talk) 20:57, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I also edited the article a bit; but it still needs sources. And try to be a bit more formal in your text. I removed some, but still some is in: never write: the park is romantic; or "the park is famous for the love nest of xxx", but write: "the park was elected the most romantic park by xxx" or "according to xxx-newspaper, the park is a romantic" and "the couple xxx lives in the park", or "according to this source, the garden represented Mao's hopes and ambitions". In that way we can keep the facts clear and get a more neutral article... Good luck! L.tak (talk) 19:49, 24 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 03:55, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Pubescence (film)
More references, please. :) Anna Frodesiak (talk) 01:56, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

Guan Xiaojie
More references, please. :) Anna Frodesiak (talk) 01:57, 25 November 2011 (UTC)