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NNU-11-22100509 (talk) 04:54, 18 September 2011 (UTC)== The Round tuo Angle（圆陀角） == My hometown, Qidong（启东）, is a very beautiful place. It's located in the east of estuary of the Yangtze River（长江）, surrounded by water , and the shape just like a peninsula. Here, there are pleasant climate , beautiful scenery , wide plain and abundant products , it's known as "Jianghai pearl"（江海明珠）. The most famous spot in my hometown is the Round tuo Angle（圆陀角）. The Qidong Round tuo Angle（启东圆陀角）scenic spot was founded in 1998, with an area of 2100 square meters , located in the Huanghai sea and south of the Yangtze River（长江）. And it's the largest freshwater wetland nature reserve in China. The Round tuo Angle（圆陀角） is the place in Jiangsu（江苏） province where we can enjoy the sunrise earliest. In the morning, people can go to the Jianghai dike （江海大堤）or the YingYang building （寅阳楼）to appreciate the beauty. The red sun is shining brightly ,and the blue waves are rippling. People admire the wonderful scenery of the sunset. In the evening, the stars are full of the sky and the moon is bright. The lights on fishing boats reflect each other ,and the water sweep around in motion. We can go to the junction of the Huanghai sea （黄海）,the Donghai sea （东海）and the Yangtze river （长江）by a small boat ,enjoying the phase shock of the three rivers. It's a very unbelievable and amazing scene. Also, there is a statue of Dayu（大禹） which symbolizes our traditional culture and history. Many men of literature and writing take delight in enjoying the sunrise in the Round tuo Angle （圆陀角）. Welcome to my hometown to enjoy the beautiful sunrise !

post: 810374270@qq.comNNU-11-22100509 (talk) 04:54, 18 September 2011 (UTC)NNU-11-22100509 (talk) 04:46, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Welcome students from Nanjing Normal University
1, Hello. Are you a student at Nanjing Normal University? If you are I want to say hello.

2, My name is Anna. I live in Haikou, Hainan. I come from Canada.

3, I can help you if you need.

4, Don't worry. Be brave. You can write. No problem.

Some good things to help you:
 * 1, Look at other articles. See how they organize it. Copy the style.
 * 2, Use the information you get for your article, and write it in your words.
 * 3, Don't use baike. It is not professionally written.
 * 4, Put this at the end of the sentences or paragraphs to show where the information comes from:




 * 5, Put this at the bottom of your article:


 * ==References==



You can write to me here: Send me a message'''

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 16:30, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Your contributed article, The round tuo angle


Hello, I notice that you recently created a new page, The round tuo angle. First, thank you for your contribution; Wikipedia relies solely on the efforts of volunteers such as you. Unfortunately, the page you created covers a topic on which we already have a page - Qidong, Jiangsu. Because of the duplication, your article has been tagged for speedy deletion. Please note that this is not a comment on you personally and we hope you will continue helping to improve Wikipedia. If the topic of the article you created is one that interests you, then perhaps you would like to help out at Qidong, Jiangsu - you might like to discuss new information at the article's talk page.

If you think that the article you created should remain separate, contest the deletion by clicking on the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". Doing so will take you to the talk page where you will find a pre-formatted place for you to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. You can also visit the the page's talk page directly to give your reasons, but be aware that once tagged for speedy deletion, if the page meets the criterion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself, but don't hesitate to add information to the page that would render it more in conformance with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, you can contact one of these administrators to request that the administrator userfy the page or email a copy to you. Additionally if you would like to have someone review articles you create before they go live so they are not nominated for deletion shortly after you post them, allow me to suggest the article creation process and using our search feature to find related information we already have in the encyclopedia. Try not to be discouraged. Wikipedia looks forward to your future contributions.  Blanchardb -Me•MyEars•MyMouth- timed 14:29, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 02:54, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:03, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:41, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Message about Huilong High School
Hello! Anna is very busy and tired from all the work she has been doing for us. So I will try to help you with your article for now. It's good work, but some comments: 1) It is hard to know what school this is without Chinese characters. 2) You still need more references. Where do these dates come from? These statistics about size? Can you find references that are in general media? 3) You should link it to the article about Nantong like this: Nantong. Is there an article about Qidong? Then it should link there also. Is there a National Green School explanation somewhere? Maybe you would like to provide it eventually? 4) Any famous alumni? Nantong is full of famous people. You could add a section with ==Famous alumni==. You can take a look at my own home school's website (also not perfect!) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sir_Winston_Churchill_Secondary_School_%28Vancouver%29 Let me know about any problems. Hope this helps. Njnu-ban-xueshenghao (talk) 13:29, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

More ideas for Huilong High School

 * You could make Shi Hairong and Nantong into wikilinks, because there are already Wikipedia articles about them. To make wikilinks, put around the words, like this; [[Shi Hairong


 * You could try to make an infobox for the article. Look at Shenzhen Middle School as an example to see how this is done.


 * Maybe say what range of ages, or what grades, the school teaches. In America and England, middle school means something different.


 * Does the school have a crest, emblem or logo?


 * In the Description, I have added this 55000 m2 so that the area is displayed in square feet as well as square metres. See if you can make the same change for the area of the library.


 * What is the plastic playground? Is it a Playing field made from something like AstroTurf, or is it something else?


 * Is it possible to take a photograph of the school? If you are able to take a picture, I can help with instructions on how to upload it.


 * Does the school have its own website? --Demiurge1000 (talk) 19:19, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!
Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:18, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Message
03:21, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Tamia Liu‎
I fixed it up. It needs more references. :) Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:23, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Some tips to help you out!
Hi, I thought I'd drop a few notes on your talk page with some help on writing articles :o)

First of all, it may be best for you to do a bit of reading, starting with the Wikipedia manual of style, which will give you a lot of information about how Wikipedia prefers its articles to be written. It's not as hard to follow as it might look; quite a bit of the information there probably won't be vital for you at first.

Second, I recommend you make a user sandbox - which is just an area you can use to practise in, and to make notes in, and to get things ready in. If you click this red link: user:/Sandbox, that will let you create that page (it gives you an edit window to start work in). Anything, anywhere, on the help and information pages which gives you an example, try it out in your sandbox until you're familiar with it.

For your article, the next thing you want to do is start collecting as much information as you can about it. Google searches (particularly in Books and Scholar) will be your best friend for this! Once you've found the information, the next most important thing is to start writing up each fact in your own words (very important, this), and make a note at the same time of exactly where that information came from. Build in the references as you go along; I'm going to copy in, down below this, a whole heap of help on doing references, which was produced by one of our best teachers (Chzz).

Here's another place that you'll find incredibly useful - citation templates which you can copy and paste into your sandbox, between tags; you just fill in the blanks from your sources into the template, and you'll end up with nicely formatted inline citations :o) It all helps.  Remember to add a references section to your sandbox (make a new line, and put ==References== on it, and type  on the next line, so that you can see how your citations look as you do them. Remember to save your page often! You don't want to lose your work.

Hopefully this will give you a good start and make life easier for you.

One last thing to keep as a motto: "It's better to write one good, well-referenced, nicely-presented article than it is to create fifty unreferenced one-line stubs!" Pesky ( talk  …stalk!) 07:26, 24 October 2011 (UTC)

Simple references
These require two parts;


 * a)

Chzz is 98 years old.

He likes tea.


 * b) A section called "References" with the special code " ";

Named references
Chzz was born in 1837.

Chzz lives in Footown.

Note that the second usage has a / (and no closing ref tag). This needs a reference section as above; please see user:chzz/demo/namedref to see the result.

Citation templates
You can put anything you like between, but using citation templates makes for a neat, consistent look;

Chzz has 37 Olympic medals.

Please see user:chzz/demo/citeref to see the result.

For more help and tips on that subject, see user:chzz/help/refs.

Something to make your life easier!
Hi there ! I've just come across one of your articles, and noticed that you might appreciate some help with references.

You might want to consider using this tool - it makes your life a whole heap easier, by filling in complete citation templates for your links. All you do is install the script on Special:MyPage/common.js, or or Special:MyPage/vector.js, then paste the bare url (without [...] brackets) between your tabs, and you'll find a clickable link called Reflinks in your toolbox section of the page (probably in the left hand column). Then click that tool. It does all the rest of the work (provided that you remember to save the page! It doesn't work for everything (particularly often not for pdf documents), but for pretty much anything ending in "htm" or "html" (and with a title) it will do really, really well. Happy editing!  Pesky  ( talk  …stalk!) 07:26, 24 October 2011 (UTC)