User talk:NWeigel

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Pat's Peer Review (Copied by NWeigel from User talk:NWeigel/sandbox)
The article is not grammatically correct or clear in what it is saying, so it is very hard to understand. There is also no clear structure to the article, so that can definitely be improved. It can be expanded to add more information.
 * I agree that the article is not grammatically correct in certain places. I am planning on completely rewriting that section of the articale. I am going to give the article a more structured format and expand it to add more information. --NWeigel (talk) 04:15, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Seth's Peer Review (Copied by NWeigel from User talk:NWeigel/sandbox)
You have made good progress fixing the problems with the article. I can see you worked on the grammar and made sure to keep things consistent in the article. I also liked how you organized the article into the lead and the manufacturing of the bulk moulding compound. Some work still needs to be done to the second half of the manufacturing paragraph. It is still hard to follow. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sjo uml (talk • contribs) 04:41, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I agree that the second part of the manufacturing paragraph is still hard to follow, and I plan to completely rewrite that section. --NWeigel (talk) 02:00, 3 December 2018 (UTC)