User talk:NYSmith/sandbox

Very nice job as you really put this article together well. Looking at the original article next to your outline really proves that this topic needed to be worked on, and your outline, itself, is already a tremendous improvement. I can't wait to see your finished product.

- Christian Lugar

Your outline is very organized, you have the required amount of information under each section, but could use a little more, and maybe a another image. But you did have the amount of sources you needed.

- Camille Sazon — Preceding unsigned comment added by Csazon (talk • contribs) 18:35, 7 October 2013 (UTC)

This is a nice topic, it seems that there a lack of information and luckily for you there is a wide variety of sources where you can find reliable information. If you can add more information plus some pictures you will have a nice wikipedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.171.100.200 (talk) 06:13, 8 October 2013 (UTC)