User talk:Nadidehazal/sandbox

Hi Hazal,

You did a great job on working with your Wikipedia draft. Here are my comments.

1. I found that style of the writing is a bit different compared with original article. When I read the original one, I feel like I'm reading a dictionary. When I read yours, the tone sounds more narrative. For the beginners in chemistry, your style would be more easy to read, but I'm not sure which one is the preferred style.

2. One quick question: Is it possible to put states (e.g., gas, aqueous solution) of the chemicals in Cannizzaro reaction? Haeseong mit (talk) 22:56, 3 December 2018 (UTC)