User talk:Naga Sravani Dasari/sandbox2

Peer-review from Mounica
Hi Sravani, I reviewed your draft in sandbox and it looks good. I think you could add little more detailed information to introduction. I already reviewed your Wikipedia article and it is a little short and there is a more scope to add information. Peer-reviewed articles could help to improve your article.Mounica merla (talk) 01:23, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

review from Sumanth Pola
Hello Sravani, I reviewed your draft article it is good that you are improving the contents in your wikipedia article and the content you mentioned about your introduction and I suggest you to place the section as history because we have to know the history of any article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pola sumanth (talk • contribs) 02:16, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

Review from Lavanya
Hello Sravani, The article shoulder surfing has many issues that you can solve, you can improvise the overview of the article and you can add some more sections to make the article clear.You can add more citations and more references that makes yor proposal strong. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Durgalavanya (talk • contribs) 03:36, 15 October 2016 (UTC)