User talk:Nagajyotsna/Kath Kuni Architecture

Review by Zhen NI:

checklists: Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Yes for the first question and no for the second.

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? It is neutral.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No

Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? There are no citations and references at this point.

Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? Yes they are reliable.

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added? See below.

First I think it is good to add a new article to Wiki, especially one with peculiar background and history of India. That would add diversity to Wiki and more similar articles around this one would appear, which would make Wiki more internationalized and more encompassing.

The structure of this new article is pretty good and in clear logic for now, and I think it would be more completed and interesting after more work is done. For example, the first paragraph said that it is a traditional technique that has passed from one generation to another. Then I would think that maybe I could see some history or the historical evolution of this technique. But I didn't. Maybe the original date, place or culture(?) could be added to give readers a brief history background of the technique, so that they would know this is, for example, a 13th century technique and has been passed through generations for centuries.

The material and the construction technique part are good. It would be better with some pictures and examples of typical structure and architecture to support the words.

The advantage part would be more completed and neutral with a disadvantage part following it.

To conclude, I think it is generally a good article with a strong potential to become better. As a reader and a learner when seeing this article introducing an Indian traditional technique, I would like to see more about the culture and localization of this unique technique.