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Article Evaluation
The article covered a variety of subtopics which helped to explain the main idea of hair discrimination. The article however has a few sections where citations are needed to back up the claims made by the author. For instance in the section "natural hair in schools", the author makes an assumption of what some schools consider to be an inappropriate hair style without providing a source to back it up. Another citation is needed to back up the author's claims on hair discrimination in the work place. Besides the missing sources, the citations that are provided are logistic and seem to be very useful. The overall article did, though, seem to sway in one direction of the argument. It could be useful for the author to add more information on the other side of the issue, bringing in the voices of the employees or school administrators for example. This addition would better allow the reader to develop their own opinion on the topic.