User talk:Nairndan/sandbox

Assignment 1
Excellent! Medmyco (talk) 02:22, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

Peer Review
- Sizing might be ambiguous to most readers: “macroconidia (7-30 X 35-160u), clavate microconidia (2.5-3.5 X 4-7u)”

- Factors required for growth is very clear and well sourced, but maybe discuss what it needs to grow, then the inhibiting factors, for a better flow.

- Should link “Tinea capitis” and “Tinea corporis”

- Restructure the second sentence, do not begin with “Then” : “The fungus invades the epidermis, enters a hair follicle, penetrates the hair shaft and grows down the length of the hair. Then, it forms a sheath of spores around it.”

- “There is an array of tests...” should be “There are”

- Possibly, explain diagnostic procedures in greater depth, more simply.

- Should link “Microsporum canis” and “alopecia”.

- Epidemiology would probably be better placed before Pathology, Diagnostic and Treatment headings.

Well done! BrigRein (talk) 18:14, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Hi, Here are some suggestions,

- Should italicize Microsporum audouinii in the sections.

- "chemical composition and the quantity of the hair sebum secreted in adults is different from that of children" I think " ...in adults are different" may be better.

- maybe link "Tinea capitis"

- Spelled Tinea coporis wrong.

Really great work.

Mengf123 (talk) 19:47, 31 October 2013 (UTC)