User talk:Nalepka33/sandbox

I think that the facts you have presented are effective and accurate. Your sources look reliable and trustworthy but also unbiased and factual. I think that the headers you have give the reader a clear understanding of what is trying to be told in terms of facts presented within the body of the article. I know that this is simply a rough draft, but just make sure to make sentences clear and to the point. I can't exactly tell how your sentences are going to look right now because you just have bullet points, but just be sure to avoid choppy sentence structure. Also, when making a final draft, be sure to include some internal links. This will help the reader with terms that they are unaware about. You should also add a picture or two of the dog. I think a picture on animal pages are extremely crucial to the readers' understanding of the article. Be sure to cite your sources by adding footnotes after every fact that you potentially got from another source. Everything looks in your own words, so I don't think you have any issues with that. Schewevp (talk)schewevp