User talk:Nalharbi2016/sandbox

peer review #1 You gave us a clear explanation about Y-27632 background, but I think it will be better if you use a sub-unite category for the function to make it more understandable. over all with what you add it looks very helpful beside the addition of references

peer review #2
hello Nada, the information that you added to this article are helpful but I wish you can divide it into sections so it will be more easier for me,, thank you and good job. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rahaf M Hassan91 (talk • contribs) 22:40, 11 March 2017 (UTC)

Hey Nada, I would like you to focus on your writing. The statements looks messy and not framed properly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.102.164.63 (talk) 01:23, 13 March 2017 (UTC)