User talk:NanciLee

Tense of synopsis of love story in Forever Blue (Cold Case Episode) wiki
The 2nd paragraph of the synopsis reads:

In September 1968, Coop was killed and the court back then ruled that the death was a drug bust gone bad, but the truth never actually came to light and his murder became a cold case within the police force. The case is dredged up when a witness claims that Sean Cooper was 'dirty,' and the Cold Case team begins an investigation, unearthing the truth behind Coop's murder and an unexpected love story between Coop and his partner, Jimmy.

The last sentence is supposed to lead into a story that should be told in past tense, only returning to the present tense when we refer to the people in the present. I'm reverting some of the content back to the past tense, but keeping all the changes that are good.

Honestly, I can't be sure if either of us are right. At first I thought it was alright, but I reread the entire section and found that there was something seriously wrong by using past tense in the story that is a recount of the love story. This particular section is not really a 'synopsis' or a narration like what I did for the section under 'The Case'. IamSooty 07:44, 10 December 2006 (UTC)