User talk:Nanhezhu/sandbox

Everything in your article is relevant to the topic and you have done a nice job at remaining unbiased in your writing. Each of the three sections of your article are relatively equal in quantity and amount of important information in them. All of your links work and you have cited each piece of information with its corresponding source. All sources are within the past two decades which is ideal. Only suggestion is that you could add one more sentence to the last paragraph to wrap the article up, the current one is relatively blunt. Brynneparkman (talk) 00:49, 10 December 2020 (UTC)