User talk:NansiReyes/sandbox

Not much is included on Alicia's early life, including where she grew up within the U.S. and her early political activity. It would be nice to include how Alicia became involved in FALN and if she had any notable roles in the organization. It also mentions her sister, who is also a part of FALN, but it does not expand on if her sister's involvement in the organization impacted her philosophies/actions and points of collaboration. There is also no information on where she is today, so having a more complete description of post-incarceration outcomes would be helpful. Aicjulial (talk) 06:07, 16 May 2019 (UTC)

The whole article is very brief on her life, in the early life section possibly including more of where she grew up in Chicago and what she was involved with and how her political roles to play in her life. In that same section there isn't anything that is citied, possibly find citations. Could include a section of her political life roles and how she became interested or introduced to FALN, as well as adding her involvement with FALN is she held a high status within. Possibly elaborate on the trial and what happened after her release, anything that she has been involved with after being released or if she's still alive. Mavila3 (talk) 20:48, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

More of a background story pertaining her childhood and young adult hood would help. Along with more background on her sister as well. I believe if you focus on adding more to those two, it will be easier to pick up and understand the rest of the information. Also, if you can, provide some information about how she impacted society in today's world. That would create a much more powerful message. Blackhawk128716 (User talk:Blackhawk128716) 16:24, 19 May (UTC)