User talk:Nansks/halbic languages

Final Review
Hi Nandini, this is my feedback for your final project. As a reminder, the 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:


 * 1) Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar. 5 points.
 * 2) Structure: The structure is a bit idiosyncratic and does not appear to follow any template. 4 points.
 * 3) Balance: At present, the article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
 * 4) Accuracy: Most of the claims are backed by citations, but not all of the citations are of the same quality. 4 points.
 * 5) Relevance: Not all of information is relevant, particularly the Culture and Religion sections, which could probably be combined and shortened considerably. 3 points.
 * 6) Length: Word count 1918/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 4 points.

The final score is 25/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 23:38, 11 May 2021 (UTC)