User talk:Napaul/sandbox

History of Sexual Slavery in The United States

The very first sentence is a little confusing, and should use some clarification on what they mean by the definition of sexual slavery.

Another main thing is that the introduction should be more leading as an improvement.

The article is neutral there isn't just one point of view on the article there is evidence to support the information that is typed out.

The links work for citations each source is appropriate.

There was one conversation about a source but it was just added on information to increase the evidence of the article. overall the article was very well informative. Napaul (talk) 19:49, 14 February 2019 (UTC).