User talk:Napor1me/Zaramo people

The article has a clear and neutral tone, though wording and grammar have the potential to be stronger and clearer. Information is scant in all areas, and there is no mention of the Zaramo people's art or craft, even in the "Culture and livelihood" section. Sources are credible with most coming from Academic journals or art institutions.

Napor1me (talk) 09:31, 25 September 2019 (UTC)