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AfC notification: Draft:John Eliot (1562–1594?) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:John Eliot (1562–1594?). Thanks! asilvering (talk) 00:40, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

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Thanks again, and happy editing! asilvering (talk) 00:47, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

John Eliot article
Hi, the comment I left on your draft earlier is basically what I have now added in the clean-up tag. If you could use footnotes in the article, that would help a lot with understanding what ideas come from what source. For example, is "When war could rightly be made, and how, was a current topic of great interest, and we should expect Shakespeare to have read more than one book on these themes." still coming from Shalvi? Thanks! -- asilvering (talk) 00:52, 3 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi - thanks so much for this. How do I further edit the text to clarify things as you suggest? - best - Ambrose Napsjam (talk) 12:36, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Also, how should I indicate book titles - italics? Napsjam (talk) 12:38, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes, italics. For the first, I suggest using footnotes, since putting a footnote at the end of a sentence or paragraph implies that whatever follows is not from that source. By the way, I see you've been writing footnotes manually, but there's an easier way, if you're using Visual Editor: use the "cite" button in the toolbar, then dump a DOI or ISBN into the "automatic" tab field. This works almost all of the time (but double-check the metadata). As a bonus, it also generates URLs that make it faster for readers to find the sources. -- asilvering (talk) 15:05, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. I have made changes.  I have removed a bunch of stuff that is my own research - ie, i have no citation for it (this was the text after quoting Shalvi).  I think this tightens things up.  I have italicized titles.  let me know if this looks right or i should do more. - thanks - Ambrose Napsjam (talk) 16:22, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * These statements in the "early life" section sourced to Ortho-epia Gallica - am I right in assuming that this is John Eliot saying so? It looks like we have outside evidence that he was at Oxford, but the rest is his own say-so?
 * The other thing to do would be to find places where this John Eliot ought to be mentioned, and wikilink back to this article. I tried a search but there are a lot of John Eliots out there, so I'll turn it back to you. -- asilvering (talk) 00:33, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
 * on the first point, yes, his say-so only. outside sources cited where known.
 * On the second, let me look and either "wikilink" or get back to you for help. Napsjam (talk) 13:05, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi. I've tried to add as many links as i could.  I only found one other mention in wikipedia of the ortho-epia - i have included that as a reference/citation.  I have tried to clarify that the early life sources are just his own words.  I hope this is looking better now.  Kind regards, and thanks for your patience. Napsjam (talk) 13:28, 8 November 2023 (UTC)