User talk:Narjes.nadimzadeh/Evaluate an Article

Improve Organization and Story Telling
The organization of the article can be improved. The lead section does not provide an overview of what is there in the article and it seems that the information are all over the place. I think it would be better if the main theme of the article is mentioned in the introduction. The article would improve if it mentions why each section is there and what is the relation between different sections.

Narjes.nadimzadeh (talk) 21:19, 1 August 2023 (UTC)