User talk:Nasachs/sandbox

Hey, just looked over your format in general of the page. A few of your headings still show the "=" signs. I think this is because you have other things on the lines that are not inside of the "="s. Also, your bullet points follow in an outline format and I do not think that is what you want. If you want them to all be in line, just use one asterisk. I copy/pasted what you have into my sandbox so that we can see everything together. I know that you are not quite finished with your references (me either) but we can revise it in class, if needed. Please take a look at my sandbox (emjohns is my username).--Emjwolfe (talk) 17:33, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

Okay, so I posted that a bit ago. I have begun to work on it more by looking over what you have written. I have put a few references in (those that I can find so far) and changed some wording around to make it more user-friendly. Please see the changes that I have made and please feel free to make any others! If you disagree with anything I have done, please let me know. I am more than willing to make further changes! When you go to work on this more, please make the changes in my sandbox so that we do not have to make too many copy/paste transitions. Again, please let me know if you have any suggestions!--Emjwolfe (talk) 00:19, 4 October 2012 (UTC)