User talk:Natasha293/sandbox

Hey the information show in your sandbox looks good to make an article but need to have the format of it. With more organization it will look better. Also remember to cite. Stephpolancoe (talk) 18:34, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

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Your description is great but these first sentences could be re-worded to better organize your thoughts,

"the critics on this have are very critical but show great ratings on the book for example,

A film for anyone whos ever climbed trees, grazed knees or basked in the comfort of a parents sympathy as they pulled you off the ground crying. Itll make your inner child run wild.it has a five star rating,and on the film people seem to watch it a lot. I still have a lot more to read on the book because it is very interesting. the book where the wild things are, is an award winning book, its a winner of Caldecott medal" — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anneteag (talk • contribs) 18:22, 3 May 2016 (UTC)