User talk:Nathan P. Hdz

Your submission at Articles for creation: Luminate Church (Covina, CA) (June 23)
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Calliopejen1 (talk) 00:41, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Luminate Church (Covina, CA) (July 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

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KJP1 (talk) 05:19, 7 July 2018 (UTC)

July 2018
Please do not add or change content, as you did at Covina High School, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. John from Idegon (talk) 01:12, 8 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Please keep in mind that a school article is not written for the school, its staff or its alumni. We do not use names. We do not write about student government. We do not make claims of achievement without sources. The article is written to be a summary of useful information for the entire world, all gathered from what others have written about the school in reliable secondary sources. We don't for the most part use information from the school, and we never publish stuff that students just know. You were correct that the principal had changed, but the source was incorrect (the school's home page is listed, but the info is on a subpage), and you had his first name incorrect. No matter how certain you may be that you are correct, if a reliable source says different, we are going to go with the source. Look at your context prior to changing established content. Nickname for example. You inserted a couple little localisms where the nickname was. That's completely incorrect. Two reasons. You'll likely never be able to adequately source them, and more importantly, the title for the field "nickname" links to an article on athletics team's nicknames. This isn't social media, this isn't a place for you to add things you just know. If you have not read it somewhere and or are not prepared to provide a citation to show precisely where you read it, do not add it. Thanks. John from Idegon (talk) 01:29, 8 July 2018 (UTC)

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Again, welcome! John from Idegon (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2018 (UTC) John from Idegon (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2018 (UTC)

July 2018
Please stop adding unsourced content, as you did on Covina High School. This violates Wikipedia's policy on verifiability. If you continue to do so, you may be blocked from editing Wikipedia. John from Idegon (talk) 02:50, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

Issue when citing
I recently edited the page Covina High School with updated information, the new dean and principal. I sourced this with the school's administration page on their website, however it was removed and a notice was posted to my talk page that I might be banned from wikipedia if I continued to not use sources. However this was not the case! Upon further review, I discovered that Covina High School's page has a lack of references, however the edits still remain! The source citing the principal (incorrect, as I may add) is not valid as well! Please help, as I see that the article is not being properly evaluated.

I am a new member to wikipidia and I am excited to be a part of the community.

Nathan P. Hdz (talk) 03:24, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey Nathan. Look now. And if you look to the page history, you'll see my explanation for removal, and when I discovered the error, my replacement of the principal. Again sorry. I didn't replace the dean's name, nor should you. The only staff person we routinely name is the head, in the US, generally the principal. In other countries, and in some private schools, the head person's title is "Dean". That's not the case here. But that is why the "Dean" parameter is in the infobox. In US public schools, the Dean is simply the disciplinarian. Welcome aboard! I'm always glad to answer your questions. Just drop a note in my talk page. John from Idegon (talk) 04:06, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

I completely understand why the removal was made, however, the page is still incorrect. The principal is not Christiana Kraus. I also noticed that an entire section does not have any sources. I had replaced Kraus with the current principal (as you can see in that source), however that was removed. I added the dean because this school has several heads, and in this case it is the principal and the dean (as it is in most schools of this district, I discovered this upon further research). The dean is not the disciplinarian, in this district at least. But I understand the changes and know that you are the professional. Nathan P. Hdz (talk) 20:28, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Luminate Church (Covina, CA)


Hello, Nathan P. Hdz. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Luminate Church".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Dolotta (talk) 16:30, 8 January 2019 (UTC)