User talk:Nathifahreid10/sandbox

Hi Nathifah, This is a very good first draft. We are making minor edits to fix formatting and improve the flow, but really this was a good draft.

To move your stub towards publication, you need to insert references directly into the text using the "Cite" tool. List Eisenberger's major publications under "Publications" and references that cite her work under "References"

You also need to create hyperlinks to other Wikipedia articles including that of her husband (also a collaborator): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matthew_Lieberman

Another important collaborator is Shelley Taylor: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shelley_E._Taylor

Their joint work is referenced in Wikipedia articles on broken heart and psychological pain, and other articles listed below.
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Broken_heart
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Psychological_pain
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prolonged_grief_disorder
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peer_pressure
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_stress

To create a hyperlink put double square brackets around the word in the text. For example, Eisenberger has collaborated with her husband Matthew Lieberman on work pertaining to the physiology of heartache or broken heart.

Write sentences describing her work to link to each of the existing Wikipedia articles that reference her.

Let me know if you have any questions. Looking forward to seeing this move to publication.

Brooks patty (talk) 17:27, 9 November 2016 (UTC)