User talk:Natinoco/sandbox

Hello. It seems that the sources you chose are good choices for your wiki contribution. In the first sentence you claim that this case was the "most significant" ruling; this is verging on opinion, so I'd suggest to remove this or reword it. I noticed that the original page does not have any images, so if it is possible, maybe you can add images to it. Cindyand (talk) 21:33, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the comment! We have gone and updated the language in the article to try and remove as much editorialization as we can notice, thanks for catching that. We have also began looking for any graphics to include in the article as that was something we completely overlooked in our planning stages. Thanks!