User talk:Natsanabria/Martha Gruening/Leoyssanel13 Peer Review

Peer Review
You did a great job putting Martha Gruening’s article together. The lead is clear and concise and previews the rest of the article. The content you added created a well-rounded view of Gruenning’s life, especially the things added about education, and notable works. The only thing I noticed is in the works section there are some words used like “brilliantly” “warmly” and “storm of” that can be seen as bias or embellishments which aren’t necessary to the article. The next thing I noticed was that the article is missing a legacy section that provides info on her passing and how she impacted her community or family. It’s awesome that you were able to find a photo of the Gomez Mill House and the story behind the house that added more insight into Gruenning’s personal life which made your article well rounded. The overall tone of the article was neutral but in the works section, there are some imbalances in neutrality. The sources are solid and directly from the publication which is awesome, and the article is well organized. Overall the article was clear and informative with strong details on Martha Gruenning’s life, childhood, adulthood, and story. Good luck with the rest of your article!

Leoyssanel13 (talk) 14:58, 19 November 2020 (UTC)