User talk:NattyG81

Jaki Graham
Hi, I reverted your recent edit on the Jaki Graham page because some of the wording you used for the information added would not be considered to have a neutral or encyclopaedic tone to it. For example, "who paved the way for many others", "in recognition of her Outstanding International Contribution", "amongst her busy schedule". Some of the new information you added (e.g. about her honorary degree) is new and can be verified, so I have re-added it, and provided a source. The article in general, though, needs an overhaul, as there are virtually no sources provided for its content other than the chart positions. As you appear to be new to editing wikipedia, you may find it useful to have a look at this page on citing sources, and/or read the guide or ask for assistance at the Teahouse to assist with future edits you make.Nqr9 (talk) 01:37, 11 August 2017 (UTC)